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Darth_Vader
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but you made it too personal, by adding The Knights of the Rose. You should make it neutral by saying Any Clan. If you truly want to help the new players, it has to be General Information and not one that promotes a certain clan or way of playing.

Also, should add some color to make the big points stand out. Say each bullet or so.

Time Posted: December 16 2008 10:27 am EST
Last updated: December 20 2008 10:20 am EST


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