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Zeltria Posts: 526 Status: Earl Karma: +4,074 [+1] [-1]	Subject: I like it.
	It's a very interesting introduction. Personally, if I read this, I would be sucked into reading more. In case you are considering making this a full-length story, then the description is not enough. Also in the last sentence you used however twice. Good luck in your story.
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Time Posted: August 7 2009 05:54 pm EDT Last updated: August 7 2009 07:11 pm EDT

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