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| Swift_Justice
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| it should be both XD "after a moment, he smirks and looks at you" Also, I think there is something wrong with the order...It would make more sense to say "he looks at you and smirks" instead of "he smirks and looks at you". Usually the continuous action is stated before the momentary action. The looking action continues on, but the smirk takes place at the end--or at least after he turns to look at you. |
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